Comments : I love you, Need you, Miss you, Want you!

  • This is a really nice poem. I totally loved it. Great job!!! 5/5

    <mOnStRiTo'S pRiNcEsS>

  • 16 years ago

    by TwiztidJuggalette

    This was nicely written. Really good job, I really liked it. 5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by Catastrophic Beauty

    Good poem.
    Wonderfully written.
    This poem was simple but beautiful.
    Excellent use of imagery here and I loved the repetition. That's really effective.

    5/5

    -Shannon <3

  • 16 years ago

    by Shinobi

    The metaphors in this poem is the main concept. You took matching metaphors to show how much you love him and miss him. The choosing of words here is fantastic. Structure and flow go smoothly as well, great job 5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by Adelle

    This poem was well thought out the repitition really created a grate flow with in the poem and fitted the subject very well.

  • 16 years ago

    by Blissful

    This was just beautiful. I loved the style you chose to write the poem in .. it was flawless. I loved the imagery you created with your words ... it was wondeful. Well done *5/5*

  • 16 years ago

    by Brittney Follett

    This poem is so cute. i really liked reading this.. I do like how you tied nature into it. it makes him seem as if he is your everything from the air that you breathe to the things you see. I really liked it. Amazing Job

    5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by nal2013

    Not good enough what are you talking about. That was awesome!

  • 16 years ago

    by Brittany Michelle

    Wow this is good!

  • 16 years ago

    by Nigel Oliver

    I really loved this poem.

    The way you metaphorically expressed your love for someone, using nature..

    you used very vivid imagery too.

    It was beautiful.

    5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by msluckyone

    Beautiful that's all i have to say great job u really know how to present yourself

  • 16 years ago

    by Jessica

    It wos ok.

  • 16 years ago

    by Jyoti Rawat

    It is nice. But it is not appriciating love not nature, Still I like to read this.
    5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by jLegendc

    Wat a metaphor! to use nature for love? wow! really nice poem.. i fell in love with u for a second there.. =D

  • 16 years ago

    by Karl Wild GG23

    I loved the way you compared love to some of the most amazing things in the world. Funny how not even the most precious of things compares to the way love can make us feel. Great job once again 5/5 GG23

  • 16 years ago

    by FridusBlueheaven

    The title is really eye-catching. I can relate with the thing you wrote. Very well written poem. 5/5 from me!!

  • 16 years ago

    by Christina

    I love it its rele cute! <3

  • 16 years ago

    by Abu3li

    It's such a nice poem that i really liked

    keep it up

    good luck

    her guardian

  • 16 years ago

    by Riley

    It was pretty good, I found it a tad repetitive though.
    I could've done with saying the "i need you, I love you, I miss you" parts only once at the beginning of each stanza.
    or maybe if the wording was changed a little...
    Anywho, it was nice.

  • 16 years ago

    by Michelle18

    I loved this one...i like the style you used .. flow was great..i enjoyed reading this poem.

    5/5