Sad face

by Cobra   Nov 7, 2007


The one day you were smiling
The next day you were sad.
I wanted to ask why you are moping
But was afraid that you will get mad.

I wanted to understand
Why a cute girl like you
Can suddenly stop shining
Not using that beautiful smile.

We became friends
I do not know why.
I will be honest and say,
I do not give a dam..!

One thing is sure
I like your company
And to see that gorgeous smile
Makes me so happy.

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  • 16 years ago

    by I Seem to be the Heartless

    GREAT poem!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

    Tense though. If you're using past stick to past: "But was afraid that you WOULD get mad."
    And 1 spelling: "Damn" not "dam"

    Fantastic work!

    Josie

  • 16 years ago

    by sexyCheckers

    Like this, It's cute =]
    5/5

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