My Promise to You

by Vincent Thornsberry   Nov 8, 2007


Look at me now,
What, can't you see how?
Just open your eyes and see,
All there is that creates ME.
I am willing you show you all.
Everything hiden behind my wall.
Everything safely locked away,
Just so long as you promise to stay.
I will love you forever.
I won't stop......Never.
Come take my hand and we'll walk.
As we do we can softly talk.
Of all the things that have come to amass,
And of all the things yet to pass.
If you come and be my love,
I'll quiet down and be your dove.
I'd represent everything good,
If only you come and love me as only you could.

@ Vincent Thornsberry 2008

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  • 18 years ago

    by HaileyHelen

    Hehe it was great! tell me if u ever want sumthing commented cuz i will!

  • 18 years ago

    by JustKristina

    Great work! lovely poem full of emotion and feelings! i love it!! keep up the great work! ;D

  • 18 years ago

    by Blissful

    I liked how you expressed your emotions here but the poem did not flow well.

    "I am will you show you all."
    ^I don't get it..

    Overall .. good job *4/5*

  • 18 years ago

    by Nigel Oliver

    I loved this poem >.<

    "If you come and be my love,
    I'll quiet down and be your dove.
    I'd represent everything good,
    If only you come and love me as only you could. "
    ^favorite stanza :D

    keep it up

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