Seasonal ABC's [Tongue Twister] Part I

by Pete   Nov 8, 2007


~~~~~~Winter~~~~~~

About an Autumns apprehend
Boldened breezes best befriend
Crystal clearly comprehend

Dusk defying darkened days
Early evenings easy erase
Frozen fingers; frost filets

Gallant goldfinches gladly glide
Happy having homes to hide
Ingesting insects iced insides

Jovial juveniles jumping jacks
Karmic killing the kestrels knack
Lifelines leaves now largely lack

Many mammals melee to mate
Normal nights that now negate
Older oaks are oft ornate

Pale petals powerless protests
Quickly quell my quills quiet quest
Robin Redbreasts rest repressed

Squirrels scamper searching seeds
Terrifying trick or treaters tease
Uplands unearth in undue unease

Vivid velvety violet views
Wintry weather, warmth withdrew
Your yearly yuletide yearns for you!

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  • 16 years ago

    by Just Keara

    I tell you one thing, you are VERY talented to do something like. this. each line have mostly all the same letters, in addition to the rhymes. 5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by Lets Keep it A Surprise

    This was extremely brilliant and put a smile onto my face after a long day. The way each word twisted and knotted my tongue made it quite sore at the end, only to find out to my surprise there was still a second part!

    Beautiful, amazing work of write.

    10/5

    It truly deserves each vote! :)

  • 16 years ago

    by NeferNoir

    Goodness! I don't know where to start comlimenting on this amazing write. The flow of creativity here flows so beautifully.. I am amazed by the way you write using alphabets combined with rhyming.. And I adore the imagination in your words..

    Also, the way you play with words to create this poem is stunning... Great work! 5/5!

  • 16 years ago

    by NeferNoir

    Goodness! I don't know where to begin complimenting this amazing piece of poem.. The creativity that you inject in this poem is priceless.. I am amazed at the way you write this piece using the alphabets and with rhyming and creative combination of words... I adore every single line in this poem... Very unusual but utterly captivating...

    Nicely written.. Great work! 5/5!

  • 16 years ago

    by Allison

    Wow, I loved your poem! It was so much fun to read out loud. ^_^ It flowed nicely and the rhyming was good, keep up the good work. I'm adding it to my favorites. *5/5*