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Another great poem!!! :D
wow this poem has alot of work put into it hu, it has lots of good points and strong word choice. it was a pleasure reading it! keep it up your doing great! ^_^

Man you keeep amazing me you know that?! o.o this poem was just like amazing! Like the girl or boy said above its cool how you made suicide like it could be your friend! It has a whole lot of emotion, amazing job. I was intense every bit of it., i was actually sad when it came to an end lol...

Keeep up the good work,
Dante :)

I love it
btw: thanks for reading my poem ' the true me'
if you liked that one read the rest of mine....hope you enjoy as much as i did yours

ty again

Beautifully written. :] I love the way you organized the stanzas and the poem had a natural flow 5/5

Hey I like the poem I like rimes MEs like rimes me funny. YOu weird