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by Dave   Nov 12, 2007


I feel hot to the touch but is it the life
burning minds of a nightmarish past
my lost love in never ending bliss

Twist my mind and make my words come to life
punching holes in the sky of night
my only chance is one last touch

bitter is the only way to describe my life
my pulse grows even weaker then before
let it end and fade away

Razors that break my skin tell me of death
its the only way i know I'm alive
tic tock the time counts down

taking the souls is the way of my death
the mistakes I've made is why I'm here
not one right move to claim

I still pray for you and for my vision of death
time standing still only made right by chance
this is where my time will end

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  • 16 years ago

    by Rhiannon

    Twist my mind and make my words come to life
    punching holes in the sky of night
    my only chance is one last touch

    Really makes your emotions seem tangible.

  • 16 years ago

    by FridusBlueheaven

    This is really great. The title is really interesting. 5/5 from me!!!