Comments : Daddy, i'm dead

  • 16 years ago

    by The Queen

    Its a lil short but its touchiNg..

    GJ..

  • 16 years ago

    by HaileyHelen

    OMG! im balling right now! this was like the best poem ive ever read I sooooo get it!

  • 16 years ago

    by Marina

    5/5 amaising emotion... sch wonderful charater... so sad and gripping well done... keep it up!
    -Marina

  • 16 years ago

    by Taylor

    Awh, this is really making me sad! I like it a lot, but if it was just a smidge longer, it'd be even better. Keep this up, this poem is really good. =)

  • 16 years ago

    by BlueEyedMystery

    It was a very interesting poem. I liked it. I liked your use of words. It didn't flow as well as I would have liked though. Well done! Keep writing!

    Cayce

  • 16 years ago

    by pookiengurgi

    I don't understand what you're dying for....still, it's a sad poem.a lil scattered,but pretty good.

  • 16 years ago

    by Kaila

    I liked it
    I kinda lacked emotion for me though
    but nice right anyways
    4/5

  • 16 years ago

    by Sweet lig

    Hmm it was pretty good! 4/8

  • 16 years ago

    by MzLonely

    Wow veryyy niceee =] so touching .. keep it up !

  • 16 years ago

    by Meme

    Wow!!!
    I loved the way u ended it
    its so saaaaaaad
    5/5

  • 12 years ago

    by BlueJay

    This is very very good. So sad, yet it has a meaning that you can't really forget.