Wow another great poem by you. I really love the way you put the emotion to this one. this is excellent!!! Another 5/5!!!

Aweh.
this poem is so sweet and cute.
i love the line 'if this world were mine'

it makes the poem flow so well :)

I loved this, proberly the best of yours of read. There is honestly nothing more beautiful then the love from a mother to her child. This was amazing truely amazing and I couldn't give it any less then a 5/5 Well done. Keep up the great work. ~Mel

That use of repetition is really damn effective, makes the poem seem familiar, and it is well expressed.
And.... It's so sweet!!!!
=^^=
5/5!!

This was really nice and sweet. I hope your bond with your child continues to strengthen.

Nice job.

Awww really cute.
it gives a good insight on your feelings and is like i said really cute!

Awww this poem is really good to. i loved how it was written for your son too. the flow was great & everything was just amazing.

Aww thats so adorable that you wrote that for ur son 4/5..

Ah-awwwwwwww~~~!!!!! oh, that's so sweet! I'm sure your son really has the best mom in the world!!!

Now for a quick review:

If this world were mine
I would give you the world
Because to me honestly
I want you to always be happy

I think that in the second line of this stanza it should be "I would give you it all" cause you already refered to it in the first line.

other than that, i think it's a great poem. 5/5

This almost made me cry, such a sweet and adorable peice.
I love how your express your feelings about your son in poetry.
Im sure it will put a smile on his face when he gets older and is able to read the love you had for him even when he was a child through your poetry.

:) well done..

Nice it is so sweat 5/5

Another fine written piece, good job. The flow is a little rocky at some lines, I have some suggestions though..

If this world were mine
I would buy you anything
To make you happy
Is all that matters

=If this world were mine... (It creates an atmosphere for the reader)
I would buy you anything[,]
To make you happy
[Coz your happiness] Is all that matters[.]

It's just a suggestion.

This is such a beautiful and moving dedication..

The love you feel for your son is beautifully portrayed throughout this piece, and it really warms the reader's heart.

It flows well throughout, and I thought the repetition worked nicely without being overdone.

HOW COME U HAVEN'T SHOWN ME THIS ONE?