Because you true me right

I think that is ment to be "Treat" me right.
I liked this piece it had a sweet warm feeling within it which really captured my heart and kept my interest. You can tell you wrote this from the heart because of the love I felt. Well done. ~mel

What a sweet piece depicting a beautiful bond.

Hope all is well.

Catchy title, but this line kinda confuses me...
I know this is true love
Because you true me right
but other than that, very good!

The last stanza stands out because it is so SWEET hehe!
Very lovely poem by you.

Take care,

5/5 Ingrid

Awww that is soo cute! i wish i could write like this you really have skills 5/5

A wonderful peice.
Its so sweet and filled with love it's heart warming.
The content was relatible, and I say where your words were coming from.

Excellent.
--Elaine

Well it was a good poem.. you have some minor errors though.. Flow is a little off at some lines..

Because you (true) me right
= That didn't make sense to me, sorry. - Maybe it's just me.

I have one suggestion :)
Try to use punctuations it will really enhance this poem.

Nonetheless, good job. Keep writing.

The title was just wonderful and truly captured my attention.

"Our love is sweet
Like a child's favorite candy
Your kisses are sweet
And taste like a strawberry"
^beautifull imagery.

Well done.

"I know this is true love
Because you true me right"

^^ Is that supposed to be treat me right?

I love the similies you used in this piece, they were beautifully done and create such wonderful imagery at the same time.

I love the 'not giving up or letting go' tone of this piece, I found it to be very heart warming and somewhat inspirational.

YOU'LL ALWAYS HAVE ME BY UR SIDE BABY!