Comments : As Blood Runs Black.

  • I'm not a fan of dark poems but I really loved it. Great job at describing every detail. 5/5

    <mOnStRiTo'S pRiNcEsS>

  • 12 years ago

    by Ashley

    Very dark and scary but in a good way..

  • 12 years ago

    by Blissful

    The imagery here was beautifully haunting. Each sentence held immense amounts of power and the flow was flawless. Perfectly penned and well done *5/5*

  • 12 years ago


    I'll calm myself, so I don't start rambling excessively over how great it is~
    *slaps self*
    It was just~~
    Well, 5/5, just excellent, really~<3

  • 12 years ago

    by 4 track demo

    The title didnt intrigue me much, but fortunately the poem made up for it in a big way, i loved getting lost in the fluidity of a fine piece and i did, thanks for the read..

  • 12 years ago

    by The Pessimistic Peabody

    Ahh this poem was overflowing with dark energy which made it very enjoyable...I loved it...a bit short but it had that energy that sucked me in completely...5/5

    -The Pocket Fiend!

  • 12 years ago

    by Live WeLL

    Hey great poem!.. it was really really powerful and very well written... really deep too.. very nice write.. keep it up and thanks for the comment =)

  • 12 years ago

    by Vincent Thornsberry

    Not bad. it had lots of emotion in it. it built up closer to the end whitch was perfect. I loved it. 6/5

  • 12 years ago

    by Melpomene

    I really liked this piece, The emotion portrayed was really deep and heart wrenching. In some places the flow seemed off a tiny touch but nothing much to entirely reuin this dark poem. The word choice really descriptive which gave an eerie and intense feeling over the atmosphere. Well done on this poem. A great read. ~Mel

  • 12 years ago

    by Shinobi

    The choosing of words here are one of the best I'd ever seen. The rhymes and structure were also great. No bad comments here 5/5

  • 12 years ago

    by Yuuki

    I thought this poem was pretty good its better than may depressing poems thats all i ever write =(

  • 12 years ago

    by Allison

    I loved it!!! It was so descriptive and it flowed so well, I could see the images in front of my eyes. Keep up the good work! *5/5*