The Wedding

by XxRobxX   Nov 15, 2007


Let me tell you a story of my life
A sad story of my past
I was called by a family
to sing a song in there wedding ceremony

It was time for the two flowers
to dance tango and say there vows
Now they meet face to face
A lovely kiss was exchanged

I was singing with my eyes closed
A love song for my friends
Until the girl I love
Was seen in the wedding dress

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  • 8 years ago

    by Em

    Rob,

    This is a very powerful story whether it happened or not to you because in life it happens.
    A good write with good rhythm which keeps the flow throughout. There is a typo on 'there' in the 2nd stanza it should be 'their'

    Take care, Em

  • 8 years ago

    by Em

    Rob,

    This is a very powerful story whether it happened or not to you because in life in happens.
    A goof write with good rhythm which keeps the flow throughout. There is a typo on 'there' in the 2nd stanza it should be 'their'

    Take care, Em

  • 16 years ago

    by Feels Like Ecstacy

    Oh woah.. that's really good. Its really short, meaningful, and wow.. you did good. 5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by nering

    Wow, did this really happen! I dont know what to say--this makes me breathless!
    nicely written

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