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by Laurenf7 Nov 16, 2007 category : Life, society / other
Lights go down The crowd roar Shiver down you spine Wanting to hear more. Drinks being spilled Sweat on our face The ringing in our ears And echo of the bass. In the mosh pit I comfortably stand Pushing, Screaming, Shoving To see my favorite band With his guitar He ran past us all "We love you. We love you" He heard all the girls call People swaying in time Like a shield around me Putting their lighters up Worshiping over "thee" Best place in the world For a concert to be (insert your country), my home Forget, your troubles and feel free.
by justeene
Hey this is really good and flows great good job.
by damont
I like this part very creative. in my opinion Best place in the world For a concert to be (insert your country), my home Forget, your troubles and feel free excellent poem. keep writing
