Cannon Ball Kiss

by Wallace   Nov 16, 2007


A Cannon Ball Kiss sent gently through the air
Cradled with love and hope for us to share

My love song has sung its merrily tune
Longing togetherness under a blue moon

A Cannon Ball Kiss sent gently through the air
Hoping that we shall be the perfect pair

My heart has been seeking for ever to be free
If only you knew of my love for us to be

A Cannon Ball Kiss sent gently through the air
Dreaming for me to be your one and only care

If only my heart could spark a lover's flame
Then maybe I could stop playing this foolish game

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  • 16 years ago

    by DeathlyAmore

    Such a sensual poem Wallace. I have been thinking, after reading the last poem i have criticized about you, I decided to add you to my favorites. If you write a new poem, I will know.

    This poem, has such illuminating light of love. I have been getting such great vibrations reading your poems. I swear, speaking your words through my mouth is like warm, honey diamonds in my mouth, just oozing.

    So embraceable. I am envious... so envious.

    _[Deathly'Amore]

  • 16 years ago

    by NyellMoonlight

    I like the ending lines, they're quite effective.
    Whole poem is interesting, it has great flow and nice descriptions. You expressed emotions in a good way, from the beginning to the end.
    Good job!

  • 16 years ago

    by peaceandharmony

    Amazing I love it. Excellent love poem. 5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by Jessica

    Awh, i love this. It's so sweet and very heartfelt, I liked the second last line best. I felt that was very unique. You used brilliant vocabulary throughtout and the way you repeated the first line was very effective. Lovely poem. 5/5

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