Escape

You seem to cover the top soil good the flow was done ok but there was no real depth to the work no core exsamples nothing for the reader to really hold on to or care about, like I said to be a great writer you need to make the reader feel for you I did not find it here sorry.

Great poem, understand how ya feel, good flow.

Completely get where your coming from, i get stereo typed as a gothic/emo kind of person don't get me wrong i have no problem with being called those things but seriously i get called that every fricken day, and im usually ticked off at the end of the day, so thats a really good poem, and emo people rock(come to the darkside, we have cookies!!!, LOL) later

That was so sad! So much emotion, such a sad but clear message so simple... yet so complicated. Very well portrayed/written!

I really like this one
Flows well
Keep up the good work =]
And thanks for the comments, sorry I took so long getting back to you
XxJaynexX