Sorry

by Jo Anna EL   Nov 22, 2007


What did I do? What did I say?
To make you feel that way.
I always tried to be good to you,
be what you want,
but somehow it ended like this...

with me breaking your Heart.
From the very start
I knew it would take time,
I knew in my soul that my life
wasn't a cheerful little rhyme.

So all I want to know now is
What did I do?
What did i say?
And I want you to know
I'm sorry for the mess I've made.

Once again special thanks to ReproducedByIntellagence she made the stanzas look better

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  • 16 years ago

    by Nikkicola

    I love this it is really good. :-) 5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by Teria

    Amazing poem, darling.
    Once again the stanzas need a bit of tweaking. But, other than that it's an amazing poem.

    Here's the way I think it could be changed;

    What did I do? What did I say?
    To make you feel that way.
    I always tried to be good to you,
    be what you want,
    but somehow it ended like this...

    with me breaking your Heart.
    From the very start
    I knew it would take time,
    I knew in my soul [[that ]] my life
    wasn't a cheerful little rhyme.

    So all I want to know now is
    What did I do?
    What did i say?
    And I want you to know
    I'm sorry for the mess I've made.

  • 16 years ago

    by justeene

    Hey this is really good, yopu are a great poet, keep it up

  • 16 years ago

    by Polaroid

    Really good, keep it up