Remember

by justeene   Nov 23, 2007


For as long as i remember,
we were a pair.
For as long as i remember,
everything about us was fair.
For as long as i remember,
our hearts were entwined.
For as long as i remember,
our parents have whined.
For as long as i remember,
you were all that mattered.
For as long as i remember,
you done nothing but flatter.
For as long as i remember,
i have loved you.
Now all i remember,
are your words " we are through "

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  • 15 years ago

    by Pengu36

    Hmm... I enjoy your writing style it's happy but it ends sad but... It realy makes you think about the poem and I found myself reading it again...

    If you ended it sweet/lovely... It would have been just a sweet/lovely poem... I found it to be still sweet/lovely... But you feel your pain at the end so you tend to read it again... Great job!

  • 16 years ago

    by Teria

    Awh. :|
    That's so sad.
    I thought it would end cute.
    I'm sorry.

    You did a wonderful job though. I like the reptition. And, the way you worded it was great.
    The ending was bam, which is good, eh.

    Maybe capitalize your I's and stuff.

    Other than that, wonderful job, darling.

  • 16 years ago

    by MizzCici

    WOW i really liked this poen great job loved how u expressed urslf and liked the flow!!! well if u can go check sum of my poems and comment for me plz!!!!!!!!!!!!

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