Tell me you dont care

by Caroline   Nov 25, 2007


Tell me i don't matter
tell me you don't care
break my heart
make it tare

call me now
and don't you lie
i want to know what going on
just please don't say goodbye

kill me with your lies
kill me with the truth
come on baby do it
take away my youth

don't ignore me
it only makes matters worse
surrender to me baby
lets put life in reverse

destroy me with your promises
destroy me with your voice
don't forget to make me cry
hurry up and make your choice

make me break
flaunt her in my face
i can take it
me, i know you cant replace

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  • 16 years ago

    by Brittany

    This was VERY well done. There's a nice atmosphere, like in an "I dare you" tone, which I think is awesome. I love that kind of challenging attitude in a poem.
    I liked the rhyming and the flow was good. Word choice was nice.
    5/5.

  • 16 years ago

    by Karl Wild GG23

    The flow was pretty good in this poem, I thought the 5th stanza was amazing and so true to say the least. As always you've done a fine job with the piece 5/5 GG23

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