To be in the dark: in progress

by Angel Demetrice   Nov 26, 2007


I live in the darkness,
you live in the light,
i watch you as you fade away,
the light turn you white,
i live forever,
darkness never dies,
i watch in the shadow,
ever as you die,
And time re-peats
i watch forever more,
as the light takes you from me,
it blinds you,
made you forget about the dark,
made you forget about me,
it made you afraid of the dark,
and it made you afraid of me,
so now in the light,
you are human,
you are mortal,
And time re-peats
i watch forever more,

I'm working on the rest i want it to be a good song
but i would like it if some if you would give me some help

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  • 16 years ago

    by I AM YOUR FALLEN ANGLE

    I have to go now and i dont know if ill be online over the weekend but i want you to know im always with you were ever you go
    just look out your window at night and im there keeping you safe. watching you as you sleep. i hope you do the same for me
    i love you baby and thats not a lie ill be there for you no matter what

    xoxoxoxoxoxoxoxoxox

  • 16 years ago

    by I AM YOUR FALLEN ANGLE

    I have to go now

    ill always be the one you feel at night
    laying next to you
    you will now im there because i love you
    when you feel your skin tingle
    im with you always
    i will be there to keep you warm
    when you need me just message me and ill try to talk
    i love you cuz you care for me
    when no one esle did
    when all who i love let me fall

    lizzieminton@yahoo.com

    i love you baby and ill never leave you alone
    never hurt you
    ill be there to hel pyou when you fall