Frogot to call

by Joseph   Nov 27, 2007


Be faithful to sincere, be by my side don't disappear
i asked for a favor, you said OK baby
so ill call you later
you said you'll call so no need to promise
I'm on a Break-down like it matters
i really waited for a very long time
to hear your voice because your always on my mind,
all i do is look for a sign, time to time..standing on this very thin line
were u left me. . in my mind i feel i have nothing.. not even a dime
so much pain as if you committed a crime so,
your sentence for this is not lie.. to phone and say sorry, i love and miss you baby,
Please don't worry
for love is true
so i pray to god..
you are too.

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  • 15 years ago

    by Always and Never

    For your first poem i liked it. mine didnt come out too good, mine made no sence, just rhymed. lol

  • 15 years ago

    by CanUKissAwayMyPain

    It was okay. for the first poem is not that bad. the flow was okay. the words were good. i kinda got confused but i like it still. very nice piece here. just work a lil bit more on ur emotions and feeling to put here. but rather then that very nice. =)

    TaKe CaRe,
    Frenchy

  • 16 years ago

    by Lisa

    I love the ending
    great work
    keep it up!

  • 16 years ago

    by Jamie Lorraine

    I agree with "someone Unknown" it did seem cluttered a little bit.

    it is your first and hopefully not your last, don't worry you will find your way. a lot of us go through this where we get stuck and can't find the right words and doesn't think that it is good enough.

    don't be so hard on yourself, give it time and good luck

  • 16 years ago

    by Joseph

    Awee!!! first 1

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