Waiting half way

by Joseph   Nov 29, 2007


So high up;
feels like floating;

knees are weak;
hands are shaking;

offering you somthing;
"for the taking?"

waiting half-way ;
as long as its taking;

bliss bliss bliss;
"made our first kiss"
Asanna you remember this?! ;

when i held you closely;
then we kissed;

comprehension it-self'
couldnt handle this;

"as you smiled'
'i smirkd.. "

it will soon stop to hurt;

so im here waiting half-way;
as long as its taking;

take your time baby;
because ill never stop waiting;

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  • 15 years ago

    by CanUKissAwayMyPain

    It has a very nice flow. and thw words u chose were good. I really like it . it sweet and cute. Great work. Keep it up. =)

    TaKe CaRe,
    Frenchy

  • 16 years ago

    by Christina

    Hey this is rly goood!!!!

  • 16 years ago

    by Kayla

    I wish i could be that girl?

  • 16 years ago

    by Abu3li

    Very nice

    liked it

  • 16 years ago

    by hope

    I liked it
    it was nice