Hi

nice poem u have there

I may not your perfect girl

this line is missing "be" lol

for a contest, i don't know

i think u have better ones

however, it's s good one

5/5

Another sweet poem by you, I bet you're the expert of the sweet poem. Simple but deep, it's another 5/5 you deserved a lot!!!

Its good but theres a few words ur missen just re-read it and ull kno..but good job!

You're the only one I needed most
The one I knew your were there for me
When I feel so lost and all alone

fav lines :) keep it up

Ok i'm one of those punctuation freaks lol so i saw lots of mistakes with punctuaction marks however the poem really had alot of meaning to it good job.

Love this poem i dont care about the grammer and punctuation errors because i understood what you were saying. 5/5

~shattered dreams~

Wow i can relate! i love it 5/5 but theres a grammar mistake..I may not your perfect girl

Hey this is a cute read .. i think it is good for a contest cuzz it has originality in style and arrangement ..keep it up

WOW I love it. It was very good and i liked the flow of it also!

If it's for a contest i think you just won lol. This poem to me is flawless. Great job. 5/5
-vino

You love me and I love you too
I cared you as what you do
But please, all I ask to you is to...

Take Good Care of my HEART!

The ending was the strongest part in this poem. The begining is a little weak though. The lack of rhymes and weak flow ruin it a little bit. 4/5 nice work though

Very good! i think its really good. emotion is the best thing in this piece as it is very strong!
Taegan Emily xxx