Love it...wonderful...blunt,to the point,gracefully poetic...amazing.

This is a really good poem. it has a lot of emotion in it, that you can really feel. wonderful poem. 5/5

Kalee

It's a great poem and shows a lot of emotion
keep writing and i will keep reading 5/5 hope:)

This is a nice poem as they said and i agree on that but i was expecting of much better vocabulary and imagintaion.. but since it is made that way i still appreciate it coz the scenario and ambiance of someone who misses and who bear pain because of loving someone who doesn't even care is brought smoothly.

I liked this alot as it reminds of myself...i hope you got your reply because am still waiting for mine since two months...keep writting

I am aboslutely in love with this poem. <3 I'ts sooo great..

Hey nice poem I really like it
I can somehow relate to it
thx for giving me a good read
5/5
kaila

Wow i love this poem and i can totally relate!!! another good peice!

Wow vey nice thoughts.. it made me smile at the end.. the whole lines are very well expressed 5/5

well done

Aww emotions are so so strong, coming from so deep in you that their touching the reader also so so deep. Sad but powerful!
Amazing read!
5/5 Keep it up!

This one is also good. It got me to smile.
L.S. Moore

Sad. and i get where youre coming from.
im in the same predicament right now.
except i've been able to let him loose from my life.
he's not someone i consider worth dwelling over.
he was my best friend.
and he let some girl who doesnt even like him
get in the wayy of our friendship.
if he picks a gurl he hardly knows over his best friend.
then hez not worth my time!

[sorry. gotta kinda mad] lol.
love the poem. 5/5. :]

Yeah.. another great poem

Nice poem..goodluck..hope she'll realize what wud it be wituout you in her life...--->(her Gurdian)

The last couplet its strong i like it
its simple but blunt and gets the poinrt across
its also well written

A very heartfelt piece...
I could feel the emotions all through the poem...
very emotional and very well described

"So just tell me what to do
Shall I live or die, it's up to you "
^^ loved it...very powerful lines..

Excellent job..

So touching and sad !! Well done.
The last part was amazing.

"So just tell me what to do
Shall I live or die, it's up to you "

I love it. very well done. i think in some way everyone can relate to feeling this way about something. you did a really good job showing your emotion. keep up the good writing! :)