Silence of Guilt

by xPerfect Chaosx   Dec 14, 2007


Thump
Blood rushing through your veins
Pulsing in rhythm
Carrying the death
The decay

Thump
Anger coursing through your body
Uncontrollable in nature
Pushing you closer and closer
To the edge

Thump
You finger the handle of the knife
Your only revenge
The lighting low
The melody of his fear sweet

Thump
Pushing you and pushing you
Forward, Forward
Hesitate not
The moment is right

Thump
One time to many
His searing words
Branded into your heart
LIES

Thump
There is not turning back
No regrets now
His tears repugnant
Tainted with her essence

Thump
Never again
Not another movement
Not another breath
No more lies

Plunge
Warmth spreading over your fingertips
Eyes widened in disbelief
The pain slowly fades away,
With the light in his eyes

Silence
Your heart stops
Your breath stops
Your pain stops
His lies stop

Whispers
Slither over your heart like venom
Course through your veins
Pumping into your heart, your soul
Flowing with guilt

Okay, I don't know if it's any good at all, but hey, I was in a mood. Anyway, please rate and comment, I'll be sure to return the favor!! Okay, thanks bye

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  • 16 years ago

    by she

    Oh this is amazing!5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by Armada the Gestalt

    O3o Powerful. My heart started racing about the middle and the tension built. The thump, thump, thump... And then the harsh 'LIES' it makes for excellent buildup. *Catches breath* An excellent, well portrayed poem.

    C: Thanks for reviewing my poem by the way, it makes me smile inside when poeple do that.

  • 16 years ago

    by Ike Dizzle

    You are right. It wasn't good at all...................................................................................................................................................................................................................It was great. haha Great job. 5/5
    -vino