Hmm, the idea IS a tad overused, but you've done it justice so I won't grudge you that.A few grammatical errors as well, but I'm just being anal retentive and they do jack all in stopping me understanding the poem, so screw my criticism, it's a good piece.
Full of emotion, and that's what poetry's all about. Keep writing!!!

Fair poem... I like it :)

It was good kinda cliche though..

anyway the 2nd paragraph was kinda confusing for me coz the 1st line of that stanza was about her looks then it changed to her personality..

anyway the rest was okay, good job

This is very good. Emotional, and yet sad. A very powerful piece. 5/5

Loved this poem..
I can relate to bits of it :)
Your a heaps good writer............

5/5

Wow huni!!! i can totallu relate..! i love it..! 5/5..! if yu need someone to lisn tho feel free to send a message X

This is a really good poem. Whoever said this poem was "cliched" was only half-right. I think it was a little cliche but some of it was just written from you. And the way it was written was really good. I like the flow. I loved the concept, it's something everyone can relate to. Good write, keep it up :)

I really like this alot of people kan relate to this..i know that i kan... Great job