This is very good.
but i don't think it should be in the sad section.
yes your are starting to see yourself again.
but then at the end is sad of not getting back up if you fall once again.

but maybe it should be in a different section.
you know :] but either way very good.

keep it up. keep on writing. love always and forever.

The reason why i love this, is because you build up to something that seems positive and a great way of life, and then the last 2 lines, its crushing. thats emotion that truly shines, great job! 5/5

I really like this. It struck a sad chord with me because it was easy for me to relate with it. Everything flowed flawlessly and the emotions were real and from the heart. Well done *5/5*

I enjoyed the read,
However the rymthes seemed forced and the flow was a little cliched. But I think the meaning behind the poem was great. Making for and enjoyable read.
Keep it up:)
--Elly.

I only have one word to describe this poem.
AMAZING!!

~shattered dreams~

Its pretty good.. and it has a powerful words! i can see the feelings was so sincerely expressed. and i think it flowed well and good imagery

Hey i must admit that this is a brilliant piece. Very nicely written indeed.

all the best and take care

Ahh, how people love to give advice to problems not their own. *nods his head towards the beginning of the comment section nonchalantly*

If I was to say how cliched something is, I think it would be wise to make very sure that whatever the person was saying wasn't something very real and very close to their heart, otherwise it would seem nothing short of mean-spirited and spiteful, falling directly out of the category of helpful. Maybe that's just me though. *smiles*

It's a sad poem. It's good. Although there's not much emotion coming out of this. Good job though.

This was a really good poem. i love the style you have. It keeps you on the edge of your seat and the words you chose they were amazing. Great job, i really felt the emotion and i can easily relate. Good job!

Even though it's sad, this is a really positive poem. I like the use of questions, they show that there is still doubt amongst this newfound positivity. Gives the poem multiple levels and is really effective. My favourite stanza is:

"No, I'm not dreaming
Its really getting better
How long will it go on for?
Hopefully forever"

5/5

Em xXx

Real emotion.. U did AMAZING ON THIS. JUST WENT WOW!

Huh... Good poem... Nice work... !
oh by the way, Yes it's true...

I hope I'll feel be better too :( I'm always sad... anyway good for you that you feel happy again! :) flow was good well done, keep up the good work

I think u should have made the lines a little bit longer and more expressed. using big words can be a chore, but it helps

Oh ma god!! wow!! it's exactly how i'm feeling at the momentttt! X

Very very good poem it was short but sweet : ) i hope it did last for you! great job 5/5<33