Without You

by Nada   Dec 15, 2007


My well-being revolves around your smile
So whenever you feeling down,
You know whose number to dial.
In fact, my first priority is never to see you frown
Baby the word is out and around
That without you
My feet wouldnt be firm at ground
Apparently your one of few
Who gave me feelings
And if only you knew
How much I find you appealing
So dont ever leave me
Or ill start crying relevantly
Because not having you
Will make my heart half-empty

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  • 16 years ago

    by azii

    Nicely done :)
    5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by JEFF

    VERY GOOD. 5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by Dan

    Great poem. That guy must be pretty damn lucky too lol.. good work

  • 16 years ago

    by Im not broken anymore

    Dont change its perfect as it is!!! Great job

  • 16 years ago

    by Kayla

    Wow... I mean seriously, wow. This poem was so deliciously beautiful and took my breath away. I thought the way you used your words were amazing. So much emotion into one poem.. I can totally relate to it. I thought of my boyfriend Tyler whenever I read it. Whoever you wrote this to is a very lucky guy =) Keep up the awesome job! <3 <3 <3

    ~Kayla~

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