Nimbus

by NightFlyer   Dec 18, 2007


Great gulf of mystery ships roll over a dew soaked horizon,
Nimbus, the great stormy vapor that's exhaled from the ground,
Condensed in fleecy masses that drift endlessly across my sleepy vision,
Aeolus, the wind god, spurs the zephyr breeze from oceanic reaches,
Sending over the azure vault these cottony clouds,
Bringing forth rainbow droplets, iridescent in sunny light and shady breezes,
In frothy white and grey, they frolic in dreamy reflection.

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  • 16 years ago

    by NightFlyer

    Thank you for your feedback!

  • 16 years ago

    by Phantasmagoria

    I would suggest that you put more spaces in between the lines to make it flow better, not all with commas at the ends, though. Poems like that seem more professional, though yours seems pro already. The visuals and senses were good.