by NightFlyer Dec 18, 2007
category :
Nature, environment /
nature
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Great gulf of mystery ships roll over a dew soaked horizon, |
by NightFlyer
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Thank you for your feedback! |
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I would suggest that you put more spaces in between the lines to make it flow better, not all with commas at the ends, though. Poems like that seem more professional, though yours seems pro already. The visuals and senses were good. |