Awe. beautiful poem. and full of emotion.
this is happening to me too. only difference is that he isn't or wasn't my bf. he was my best friend. and he told mehh our friendship is more important than some girl. he promised me he'd never pick a girl over us. over the friendship we shared. .but in the end. his words were nothing more than illusions. and all the things he said. were just some pretty words for me to believe and be deceived by.
im trying to patch up our friendship even though i shouldnt even bother anymore. but anyway. great poem. 5/5.
This is really great! The emotion that was protrayed was amazing! You can tell it was written from the heart. It was really good in that basically anyone can relate to it. My favorite was the ending lines. WOW GIRL! That really hit home. It was great! It was a very super amazing poem.... you did a great job.. keep up the amaz-az-ing work!!!
I liked it, the situation is very relatable. The rhyme and flow of it works well. My fave part would have to be the last two lines. A suggestion: "It took some time to trust you
But I eventually took down my walls." When i was reading it, 'took down my walls' came along kinda weird. I think let or something else would flow better. But it's still good the way it is.
I really like this poem && the emotions in it. I know what it's like to feel like this, only with 3 of my best friends. It's one of those poems that a lot of people can relate to, and those poems are really good. soo...good job, 5/5
Very well written... so very emotional...
the first few stanzas describe how you felt to have some in your life... i liked that part most.. the feeling of being in love is the best feeling...but to loose someone is the hardest...
very well described...