Comments : Without You

  • 12 years ago

    by Aubrey

    Good Poem.
    I can relate to it and I love how you wrote it.
    Keep up the great work!
    :]

  • 12 years ago

    by Lecrissa

    Oh my lord, Great flow ghing subject. 5/5 i made it a fav.

  • 12 years ago

    by FlawlesslyTarnished

    Awe. beautiful poem. and full of emotion.
    this is happening to me too. only difference is that he isn't or wasn't my bf. he was my best friend. and he told mehh our friendship is more important than some girl. he promised me he'd never pick a girl over us. over the friendship we shared. .but in the end. his words were nothing more than illusions. and all the things he said. were just some pretty words for me to believe and be deceived by.

    im trying to patch up our friendship even though i shouldnt even bother anymore. but anyway. great poem. 5/5.

  • 12 years ago

    by TrUtH hUrTs

    Hey i like this poem..really gets u thnking about all those people in our lives..we become dependant upon.. and eventually we have to leave them behind and move on.. nice stuff...keep it up

  • 12 years ago

    by JustKristina

    This is really great! The emotion that was protrayed was amazing! You can tell it was written from the heart. It was really good in that basically anyone can relate to it. My favorite was the ending lines. WOW GIRL! That really hit home. It was great! It was a very super amazing poem.... you did a great job.. keep up the amaz-az-ing work!!!

  • 12 years ago

    by KJ

    "It took some time to trust you
    But I eventually took down my walls
    You helped me through a lot
    And caught my every fall"

    I loved that stanza 4 some reason.
    Very good write. Nice flow and rhyme. Perfectly written
    5/5

    PaSsIoNaTe kIsSeS

  • 12 years ago

    by Michael D Nalley

    Very well written poem releasing much feeling

  • 12 years ago

    by Sweet Fragility

    I liked it, the situation is very relatable. The rhyme and flow of it works well. My fave part would have to be the last two lines. A suggestion: "It took some time to trust you
    But I eventually took down my walls." When i was reading it, 'took down my walls' came along kinda weird. I think let or something else would flow better. But it's still good the way it is.

  • 11 years ago

    by CHEMICALcaitlin

    I really like this poem && the emotions in it. I know what it's like to feel like this, only with 3 of my best friends. It's one of those poems that a lot of people can relate to, and those poems are really good. soo...good job, 5/5

  • 11 years ago

    by noha

    Beautiful poem,i like how the feeling come out from your heart to beautiful words,i love the first stanze its my favorait,and flow is good ,keep writting and well done 5/5

  • 11 years ago

    by Lonely Rider

    Very well written... so very emotional...
    the first few stanzas describe how you felt to have some in your life... i liked that part most.. the feeling of being in love is the best feeling...but to loose someone is the hardest...
    very well described...

    keep writing..

  • 11 years ago

    by anurag

    Strong emotions nice one