My sweet queen

by damont   Dec 22, 2007


Her sweetness is like honey.
her body is warm and cuddle
her smile is brighter than the sun
she is beautiful but im not done
her personality is of a ever growing rose.
beautiful at all times and it shows
she is unique but words can't explain
her style has grace and is untamed.
i love to bring a smile to her face
she is smart and her skin is dark,
her eyes posses the beauty of the sunrise
and a passion so strong it can't die.
her natural look is of the angels.
she is all wonderful all around no matter the angels.
she has God on her side.
and God is going for the ride.
the only problem is
she can't see most of this
but i will show her the truth not lies
her care reaches pass the skies
and she is wise beyond her time
i think i end here on that note
save more for later making this one better wrote.

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  • 16 years ago

    by xxrachxx

    Awwwww u discribed her so nicely great poem

  • 16 years ago

    by TwistedAngel xx

    "her body is warm and cuddle"

    I think warm and cuddly, sounds better. Just for the flow of the poem.

    "her smile is brighter than the sun
    she is beautiful but im not done"

    just putting the dash in I'm will improve that but i really like this line. very sweet.

    It is true how you try and tell the ones you love how great they are and sometimes they cannot believe you.
    This poem was so sweet and meaningful.
    Hope you have found your true love.

    ^_^

    great poem

  • 16 years ago

    by JustKristina

    Woah.. this is truly amazing! So sweet and you can tell that it is written from the heart. She is such a lucky gal to have someone that loves her like this. If only every guy could write poems like this *sigh* haha!!!! wonderful word choice and wonderful flow.. wonderful rhyming.. wonderful.. okay, so its basically amazing!! haha keep up the freaking awesome work! :D

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