Beauty

by jade   Dec 23, 2007


Beauty's not important
its just ones point of view
marely ones opinion
of what they think of you
yet never satisfied enough
we think their better looking
we think we have it tough
how can you define beauty ?
when no one thinks the same
that guy thinks shes ugly
but he thinks shes a babe
we seem to think their perfect
we seem to think were fat
tho someone else thinks different
and thats just
well thats fact

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  • 16 years ago

    by meandhim080307

    I love the message that you are sending in this poem. i thought the poem itself was amazing. i would like to make a couple of suggestion, though.

    "marely ones opinion"
    **should read "merely ones opinion"

    **i thought the last few lines threw off the rhyme and rythym of the poem. you may want to consider revising, you may not. its your poem, your decision.

    this was a great poem with a fantastic meaning, wonderful job with this. 5*5
    Kimberly

  • 16 years ago

    by chind

    Thats so true.
    :)
    liked it heaps
    and the flow

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