Comments : I Cannot Sleep

  • 16 years ago

    by Avan Ahmad

    Aww nice poem. the worst feeling is when I miss someone but its the best feeling when you see them and hold them. I enjoyed reading it try to add more what else do you miss. dast xosh

  • 16 years ago

    by Mousie

    Aww so cute, god do i know the feeling! loved it yet again!

  • 16 years ago

    by .K.i.T.t.Y.

    Sweet lips, and itll be perfect. its so sweet. and something anyone can relate to. i loved this poem. youre such a sweet guy goran.

    and ive posted another poem. waiting for your opinion!

    -kitty

  • 16 years ago

    by Sweet lig

    Hmm i can see myself w/this poem.. coz there are alot of times i cant sleep and same thoughts.. ilove this piece i was enjoyed alot and i guess it really inspire me! wonderful work GORAN..keep it up5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by NyellMoonlight

    I like this piece. The emotions in it are expressed in a good way and I can relate to this poem in a way. Simplicity of this poem points out the feelings even more. The atmosphere that you created is captivating and whole piece is greatly written. It sounds truly sincere, like it's straight from the heart, filled with raw emotions.
    I like the flow from the beginning to the end, too, rhythm of the whole poem is interesting.

    Keep up!
    5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by xxxStarSxxx

    I love this poem. it reminds me of my boyfriend when he's gone and I miss him. You put so much emotion into your poems. I love it. 5/5

    P.S. I just have to go buy your books. ^_^

  • 16 years ago

    by JustKristina

    Great poem. It is simple and sweet and to the point. I love the way that you used the Stars and Moon. wonderful poem! keep it up! :D

  • 16 years ago

    by The Sky is Falling

    This poem is written beautifully. I loved it. You did a wonderful job writing it. keep up the great work.
    5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by Michael D Nalley

    This poem reflects very well a passion of timeless and astronomical proportion

  • 16 years ago

    by crystaljean88

    This poem was very different, i liked it very much.. i thik it felt a lil forced tho n u need sum spellin corrections.. but it was a nice poem

  • 16 years ago

    by ABake

    Aww. I think this is beautiful. Although it is a little short for my preference of writing but still had well expressed emotions. I can relate to what you feel :]]
    Great job.

    Amber :]]

  • 16 years ago

    by BeautifulxMess

    Wow it feels like forever since I've
    read one of your poems Of course
    still one of the greatest poets on here.
    Keep up the great owrk..could you please
    look at my latest 2? Thank you :)
    5/5<3tay

  • 16 years ago

    by Brittany C

    Great poem :) I feel that way about my guy. It had a good flow for the most part. The word choice was great. It can also be easy to relate to. 5/5

  • 15 years ago

    by Sourav

    So simply expressed the deepest feelings of heart. Nice flow and well written!

  • 15 years ago

    by Crystal Gaze

    Goran,
    this piece was very sweet and short. I loved it as I always love the words spilling from your pen. You truly have a way with words.

    5.5
    Your deserve.
    --Elaine.

  • 15 years ago

    by Goth marionette

    U r really a fantastic poet...I do admire the way u wrote that poem..it was so simple ,sad but at the same time it was so beautiful...good job...keep it up
    Take care:)..