Stop

by Ike Dizzle   Dec 26, 2007


No offense to no one
But this has to stop
I m tired of you losing blood
Until you finally drop

What s the point in cutting?
To shorten your life
To ease the pain
With each sharp strike

Ain t nothing that bad
That you have to turn to this
So you lost your lover
Just get over it

There are more people in the world
One that will love you for who you are
But if you keep cutting yourself
They ll never find their star

Family problems
It s just apart of life
Just keep thinking positive
And put down the knife

There s more ways to release pain
Then to cut your life away
Just put the sharp objects down
And find another way

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  • 11 years ago

    by CARRIE AKA CAREBEAR

    That's so sad but it's good

  • 11 years ago

    by Jessica

    Some parts of this were a little blunt but it's so true! i totally agree with you and it has a good message to it. you're a great writer, keep it up yo. :]

  • 11 years ago

    by Fake Facade

    No offense to no one
    But this has to stop
    I m tired of you losing blood
    Until you finally drop

    ^i really liked this stanza.

    I found it suprising reading it, cause i didn't think that's how the poem was going to go, i thought it would have been different considering the title 'stop'
    and not many people write about not cutting, where is a bit sad.

    but great poem though ^^

  • 11 years ago

    by Bradley Peter

    Wow, a positive piece that invloves a knife, I never thought I'd see the day, well bloody done, I'm impressed. I liked what was being said, but at the same time, you did seem a little insensitive, with lines like 'So you lost your lover, Just get over it'. I really liked the use of the word 'ain't' in the first line of the third stanza, it made you seem much more down to earth, and gave the piece a much more casul feel. Good work again.

    Brad

  • 11 years ago

    by Irene

    GReat!
    finally a reasonable m8!
    5/5 =D