No offense to no one
But this has to stop
I m tired of you losing blood
Until you finally drop
^i really liked this stanza.
I found it suprising reading it, cause i didn't think that's how the poem was going to go, i thought it would have been different considering the title 'stop'
and not many people write about not cutting, where is a bit sad.
Wow, a positive piece that invloves a knife, I never thought I'd see the day, well bloody done, I'm impressed. I liked what was being said, but at the same time, you did seem a little insensitive, with lines like 'So you lost your lover, Just get over it'. I really liked the use of the word 'ain't' in the first line of the third stanza, it made you seem much more down to earth, and gave the piece a much more casul feel. Good work again.