Yes, i agree with alexis it was kind of hard to understand but it didnt make the poem any less beatiful.
i liked the emotion put into this one it was nice.
5/5

Liked the emotions and expressions all the way through. The lines really touched me: "It hurts, how you can ever break my heart
Why did you have to go, darling I need you so"
The flow and choosing of words was amazing. Keep up the good work 5/5

Great poem.
i get this. i feel the same way about this kid.
but i dont have a second chance with him
or anything. because he moved away. sux. :[

anyway. great poem. nice emotions. well written. 5/5.

Nice poem,, It flowed well.. Also it had a strong emotion inside.. Well done.. Keep up the good work.. 5/5

Um I tried editing it but i accidentally pressed back and it erased it all.
Please majorly edit this for grammatical and spelling errors and send me a PM when you have edited it and I will comment/critique it again

Aw, this almost made me tear up. The emotion in this was so powerful and I really loved it. Great job!

.:CiNdY:.

Wow reminds me of my late fiance, anyways good poem, the flow was a bit off. but great word choice. another 5/5 and thanks for the comments on mine

And be love- I think it should be -and be loved-
youve- you've
I don't understand why you write you sometimes like u and sometimes like you...
All in all, nicely written, with good flow from the beginning to the end. It has typical rhyming at "go"- "so" and that ruined impression for me a bit. (I don't want to offend you, that's just my opinion)
I couldn't really feel emotions while I was reading this... It's probably just me, don't be offended by my words.

Simple thoughts can sometimes be the most beautiful, tragic, and hardest things to say.

this was amaizing
5/5

One correction "Your such a simply everything to me" it's suppose to be "You're simply everything to me" hmm that's it.. nice poem.. =] write your heart out next tym...

I liked the emotion. Not one of my favorites but worth reading. The message is clear and your word choice was good. ^.^

Well this was really hard to understand... the sentences didnt make sense...i had to read it a few times to understand it..maybe you should revise it a little.

So very sad,but good job

Well it was good. Simplicity would be the one word to describe it. It was sad and actually I am sort of going throught the same thing as what you wrote. So It was very close to home. Good job

Good Job

Very wll written simple and to the point i like it

Great feeling come through, romantic ,so sweet , i love it