Comments : My Undying Love...

  • 16 years ago

    by Shinobi

    I really liked the way you wrote this piece. The flow was great all the way, although there weren't much rhymes. The idea stood strong with the repetance of "I still love you". Enjoyed reading it and probably would write a poem about a similar subject. Thanks for being a source of inspiration 5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by FlawlesslyTarnished

    Awe. a poem written so sweet and beautiful.
    this has happened to me too.
    sometimes, though, i feel like i should let go.
    but hey, it's not really my choice. "/

    love the poem. 5/5.

  • 16 years ago

    by Black Princess

    Beautiful, great story line, short and sweet and obviously straight to the point. I adored this and enjoyed the read well done!!!! 5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by ABake

    A cute tribute. I think that the emotion and love is pure. With the poem, the flow was off a bit. But still beautiful. I was kinda confused about the star stuff it kind of makes you not want to read the poem. Lol. Also you put question marks where I didn't think it was a question. Other than that great short peice.

    My favorite line was >>
    How many glasses of tears I cry.

    I love it. Great job!

    Amber :]]

  • 16 years ago

    by TracyM

    Wow, I like the way you've written this poem, the emotion is strong, and really was beautifully writen, and a most enjoyable read. Keep it up.

  • 16 years ago

    by FridusBlueheaven

    Wow, this is very enjoyable read poem...
    I love your simplicity and that's what I can't do...
    Well done and excellently written...
    It's 5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by Blissful

    I liked this one! The repitition in this case worked! It made the message clear and powerful. I could relate with most of it which made it a joy to read. Well done *5/5*

  • Aw, this is such a cute poem. Sounds like my poems, but it's still great. Good job!

    .:CiNdY:.

  • 16 years ago

    by HidinVictim

    Umm, not one your best but still pretty cute, you can definatly tell that there is alot of emotion behind this poem.. 5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by NyellMoonlight

    I like it a lot, it holds so many emotions. I like the repetition, it is effective and it creates great flow through the whole poem. Very vivid piece, filled with heartfelt feelings and sincerity.
    My favorite stanza is:

    -No matter how many times I get hurt
    How many glasses of tears I cry
    I still love you...-
    ^^^
    Beautifully said.

    Keep writing!

  • 16 years ago

    by Dave

    Wow you can really feel the emotion you put in to this great job and an exclent poem thanks

  • 16 years ago

    by EssenceOfLace

    No matter what, love is love, and when you love someone, it never ends.
    you expressed this so lovely.

    5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by jLegendc

    Hehe i like this poem although it's too simple and it didn't have a flow bcoz of this stanza:
    "No matter how many times I get hurt
    How many glasses of tears I cry
    I still love you..."
    express your feelings more and you'll write a wonderful poem =] ipakita mo lang ang lahat ng iyong nararamdaman! hehe you're pinoy right?

  • 16 years ago

    by RobinAnn13

    Awww. This was one sad AND sweet. It's hard to accomplish that. I liked the repeating line "I still love you.." it says so much by itself. This is a very powerful poem. 5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by Michelle18

    This is really good...the repeatition was good and i like the message behind it. ..you did a great job with this one.

    5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by Sumit Ojha

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    I Love your way of typing...
    Oh by the way, you write really nice... you are a nice poet.

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  • 7 years ago

    by Dave

    Very beautiful truly heartfelt over brimming with emotion