Empty

by FridusBlueheaven   Dec 29, 2007


Title : Empty
Written By : Fridus Blueheaven

Well, it's hard to find a new inspiration
I'm blank and caught in a hesitation
Can't help to the mess of empty emotion
But writing this one is my truly devotion

I don't know what to write, it's all empty
Looking back in the mirror, but it's just me
Bruised heart and painful mind are what to see
I'm tired of dealing with the possibility

Empty mind bothered me time after time
Force to move it all, is it a mind crime?
Harder to breathe and it won't ever feel fine
Heartless soul and everything is undefined

A poet with blank inspiration in his heart
His heart has gone through different part
Lonely poet who doesn't know where to start
He's been trying so hard to have a deal with art

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  • 16 years ago

    by A l y s s a

    Haha this is great. I know what you mean when inspiration is nowhere to be found. But you used that exact thing to inspire youself. Fantastic job :)

    Ally. x

  • 16 years ago

    by Poetic Ninja aka Papachopchop

    I liked the 1st stanza most of all but the whole thing is good. You have a lot of talent. Continue writing and you'll be a jedi poet one day. LOL ;)

  • 16 years ago

    by SH3S fiNAllY H3R3 l0V3 U N3NA

    Wow, this left me speechless.
    The flow was amazing and the words you used were just perfect.
    It sucks to be left without inspiration to write about.

    "A poet with blank inspiration in his heart
    His heart has gone through different part
    Lonely poet who doesn't know where to start
    He's been trying so hard to have a deal with art"

    ^This was my fav!
    Great job!
    5/5

    *Cindy*

  • 16 years ago

    by kati

    This is great!! it flowed and it had a lot of meaning...5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by Christina

    Awwwz very sad poem....but very well written!!!! it had great flow!!! keep it up.....and u deserve anothen 5/5!

    <3 i love you silly

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