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by sexyCheckers   Dec 29, 2007


I should've said I loved you,
I should've said be mine,
I should've said I cared,
But instead I wasted your time.

I'm sorry for not being honest,
I'm sorry for playing you around,
I'm sorry I kept leading you on,
With no intentions of following it down.
And in the end all I did was let you down

Do you know I care for you?
Do you know I'm crazy about you?
Do you know you keep me up at night?

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  • 16 years ago

    by pookiengurgi

    Pretty good..but you need more after your ending and it would be great..I really like it

  • 16 years ago

    by gabriella

    With no intentions of following it down.
    And in the end all I did was let you down
    these sentances dont go together and i fel like u left me hanging it needs moreat teh ending

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