Don't Forget You're Mine [You promised me forever]

by BrixGoesxRawr   Jan 1, 2008

That first kiss; true loves first kiss
Oh baby, it told me you were the one
And no -- I'll never let go of you
Don't forget you're mine [you promised me forever]

Tightening of the chest, never loved like this
Baby, don't pour down rain on yourself
Because you bring the sunshine right into my life
Don't forget you're mine [you promised me forever]

I promise I'll give you the best of me
I'll give you all of me, every part of me
I won't hold anything back from you
Don't forget you're mine [you promised me forever]

Black and white turns to vivid color
You lift me up, oh so very high
You're my drug && I'm addicted to your words
Don't forget your mine [you promised me forever]

If you ever turned away and walked out that door --
Weather forecast: Calls for cloudy skies && foggy eyes
Just hold me in your arms, and we can forget about everything
Don't forget you're mine [you promised me forever]

You got me going crazy, I can't put it all in to words
Take my heart baby -- hold it gently in your hands
Who needs to sleep? When your dreams have come true.
Don't forget you're mine [you promised me forever]

Fact: I need you because I love you
Just don't forget you're mine


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  • 16 years ago

    by sweetlysimplyinlove

    I love ur poem

  • 16 years ago

    by Anonymous

    That's one of the better poems I've read on this site. Originality, creativity, it was really good. I usually like poems that rhyme, but yours didn't need to, as it flowed well and was worded well.

  • 16 years ago

    by Aimie

    AWW! i love this so much, the entire time i was reading it , it reminded me of my boyfriend hehe

    nice work
    5/5 :D:D
    well done hehe:)

  • 16 years ago

    by Romancing the Darker Side

    I liked how you used symbolism for love, and I also liked the repitition. I think that you could have used a different title though, and thought up something that wasn't a line in the poem. Great work though. :)

  • 16 years ago

    by moonlil

    Great poem!