Very good. this was my best part....
Tightening of the chest, never loved like this
Baby, don't pour down rain on yourself
Because you bring the sunshine right into my life
Don't forget you're mine [you promised me forever]
The tighten in your chest always is a good sign of love or falling in love with someone ;) Great work 5/5
Wow this was just so beautiful. Each word you spoke was so easy for me to relate with. The repitition of the title after each stanza was effective and got your message across clearly. I feel like the third stanzas lines just reapeated itself and it kinda threw off the flow for me.
"Weather forecast: Calls for cloudy skies && foggy eyes"
^that was original and I loved it!
You're my drug && I'm addicted to your words"
^I could so relate with that!
"Who needs to sleep? When your dreams have come true."
^this line was beautiful.
I loved this poem! There was so much love written into every line. So much emotion, and you conveyed your message perfectly. I loved the title and I loved how it was tied in to every stanza of them poem. It was so well done. And I loved the very ending, it summed up the whole thing so beautifully! Keep up the amazing work!
I liked how you used symbolism for love, and I also liked the repitition. I think that you could have used a different title though, and thought up something that wasn't a line in the poem. Great work though. :)
That's one of the better poems I've read on this site. Originality, creativity, it was really good. I usually like poems that rhyme, but yours didn't need to, as it flowed well and was worded well.