Comments : Closest Thing To Perfect; Farthest Thing From Me

  • 16 years ago

    by always the same

    This poem is EXACTLY how I feel. I can totally relate to this. It's an amazing poem. Keep up the great work. 5/5

    Cass

  • Very well writen excellent choice in words good job 4/5

  • 16 years ago

    by damont

    I can see your opinion very clear. its cool to think that way nice poem keep on writing. it sounds like a perfect love and relationship from the way you described your feelings.

  • 16 years ago

    by Ingrid

    I accept you with your flaws
    You're amazing, don't you see
    And you're the closest thing to perfect
    But the farthest thing from me. .

    Amazing how you captured the feeling of real love...Loving is about just that..accepting someone in spite of his/ her flaws.

    Take care,

    5/5 Ingrid

  • 16 years ago

    by Krysten

    I accept you with your flaws
    You're amazing, don't you see
    And you're the closest thing to perfect
    But the farthest thing from me. .

    i loved it...beautifully written with good word choice and grat flow...a 5/5 for sure. it def describes how i feel, well used to feel about my boyfriend. great poem in all.

  • 16 years ago

    by Krysten

    I accept you with your flaws
    You're amazing, don't you see
    And you're the closest thing to perfect
    But the farthest thing from me. .

    i loved it...beautifully written with good word choice and grat flow...a 5/5 for sure. it def describes how i feel, well used to feel about my boyfriend. great poem in all.

  • Wow, this poem left me speechless. It was absolutely wonderful. It was really sad, and everything fit just perfect. Great job! 5/5

    .:CiNdY:.

  • 16 years ago

    by Loved In Hell

    "I accept you with your flaws
    You're amazing, don't you see
    And you're the closest thing to perfect
    But the farthest thing from me. . "

    awww i love this poems its so sad but real i deffinately think you deserve a 5/5

    Hell

  • 16 years ago

    by TheWorldFellNUWerentThere

    Wow. I absolutely liked this poem. I enjoyed every word of it. I can't pick a favorite stanza because they were all so good. Are you in love or what eh? lol jk.

    But anyways, the flow was good and so were the words.

    I enjoyed it 5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by Sweet lig

    Very interesting piece! seems the imagery such powerful even the whole message more this stanza...

    My love for you burns with no end
    And my heart belongs to you completely
    You're the closest thing to perfect
    But the farthest thing from me

    very enjoyable.. 5/5

  • Aw, this poem was so wonderful. I really loved it.

    "My love for you burns with no end
    And my heart belongs to you completely
    You're the closest thing to perfect
    But the farthest thing from me"

    ^This was my favorite stanza in the whole phone. Great job! 5/5

    .:CiNdY:.

  • 16 years ago

    by xxTaegan Emilyxx

    I accept you with your flaws
    You're amazing, don't you see
    And you're the closest thing to perfect
    But the farthest thing from me. .

    UMMMM........PERFECT!!!!
    ahh i loved it and ^^^ those 4 lines made it go BOOM! the whole poem was awesome then u get there and its like nawwww!
    Girl i loved it!!! Very close to being my favorite poem!!!
    xx
    Taegan Emily

  • 16 years ago

    by HidinVictim

    Umm thats funny, i had seen this poem befor, and was like what do i say to that its perfect, i love this poem, and it really makes me think. i LOVE the last stanza, it explains my situation perfectly... 5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by BECCA lessTHANthree

    I like it.. its cute and simple but still the emotion is expressed nicely, keep it up :)

  • 16 years ago

    by lish

    This title immediately caught my attention, and the poem outdid my expectations, this poem is truely awesome, well done

  • 16 years ago

    by Teria

    I love this poem. I can easily relate to it. In some parts it kind of lacks emotion, but maybe that was just me. And, the second stanza first line [andsecond] need a bit of work in order to flow better.

    But, other than that you did a wonderful job with this poem.
    And, I love it.
    5.5

  • 16 years ago

    by KJ

    Very good poem. Everything about it was just perfect, starting with the language and voice. Also I can totally relate to this poem, and I think that every girl in their lifetime does...The stanza that really stood out to me was:

    "My love for you burns with no end
    And my heart belongs to you completely
    You're the closest thing to perfect
    But the farthest thing from me"

    I read the whole thing, and then I went back to that one for some reason. But like I was saying, perfectly written piece. =}
    5/5

    PaSsIoNaTe kIsSeS

  • 16 years ago

    by rachel

    Wow. that was just plain awesome. I love the way you wright and this poem is so easy to relate to. you did a fantastic job
    5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by Sole

    Really nice poem, excellent choice of language and easily relatable. However, I thought the flow seemed a little broken where the stanzas and lines changed in length and syllables. Other than that, good rhymes, great poem.

    Sole.x

  • 16 years ago

    by NyellMoonlight

    Very touching piece, filled with emotions from the beginning to the end. You created great flow and the whole poem is very interesting. Every stanza sounds so sincere, like it's written straight from the heart.
    My favorite stanza is:

    -I accept you with your flaws
    You're amazing, don't you see
    And you're the closest thing to perfect
    But the farthest thing from me. . -
    ^^^
    Very touching ending.

    Well done!