Comments : Closest Thing To Perfect; Farthest Thing From Me

  • 16 years ago

    by ALEX

    That's the best thing about love, isn't it? Spectacular way to express it. Really glad I read this. Love the title. :)

  • 16 years ago

    by Kristina

    This poem is very deep and that's what I like about it. I'm sure a lot of people can relate to it, so that makes this poem excellent! It also flowed really nicely. Please keep on writing, you have talent! 5/5

    ~Kristina

  • This reminds me so much of my fiance.He used to be the sweetest thing when we first started dating.He was romantic and everything.I thought he was perfect.But as we continued to date he started to change a little.He started getting an attitude over the smallest things but we have worked through that and we're still together because I fianlly accepted that I'm not perfect and neither is he but you just have to live with it.Anyways,this poem was amazingly written.5/5 for sure

    <3Amber

  • 16 years ago

    by Blissful

    First off .. beautiful title. It truly drew me and I was eager to read it. I could relate with this poem 100% It was as if you were describing the guy I love. Flawless.

    "My love for you burns with no end"
    ^beautiful line.

    Well done *5/5*

  • 16 years ago

    by Jacqui Armstrong

    Amazing poem great flow... and i can totally relate to it... explains perfectly how things can sometimes go and how hard they can be.

    well done keep it up

    Love
    Jacs
    xxx

  • 16 years ago

    by Lemma

    Can totally relate to this simply beautiful, heartfelt poem. It's so sad though! I've just read this after having an argument with my boyfriend (we're long-distance) and it fits our situation perfectly. We're ok now though, just had a nice long phone conversation and everything is good, which is why it's taken me over an hour to type this comment!

    This really is such a lovely poem, I wish I could give it a 6 but I suppose we'll have to put up with a 5 =) You're so going on my favourites list now hehe.

    Em xXx

  • 16 years ago

    by Michelle18

    Aw.... beautiful poem.... the beginning immediatly captured my attention... and you did a nice job ending it. another excellent poem.5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by BlueEyedMystery

    I have just GOT to say the title was AMAZING. I can never think of any good titles for my poems. This poem was both sweet and sad. I wanted to cry and say "awwww" at the same time. I love poems that can do that to me. Your use of words was amazing as well. Once again, fantastic job! :]

    Cayce xx

  • 16 years ago

    by Ashley

    Yes i can truly relate, but i spent alota time trying to convince one that he is perfection in my eyes... great poem... nicely written... it explains a story very well

  • 16 years ago

    by XxToWriteLoveOnHerWristxX

    Nice poem its sweet and sinister at the same time. hes perfect but not yours..amazing..
    5/5 !props!

  • 16 years ago

    by Lonely Rider

    Beautifully penned... very impressive work...
    loved it..

    I accept you with your flaws
    You're amazing, don't you see
    And you're the closest thing to perfect
    But the farthest thing from me

    loved this stanza the most specially the last two lines...

    great work...

  • 16 years ago

    by Jo Anna EL

    Wow i loved it.your poems really help me.this one relates to me in so many ways. I dont care that people have to comment about your tiny mistakes.I liked it for what it was.And it was beautiful and so amaxing...
    you amy not be the person in your poem may be close to perfect but i think what really is perfect is your poem...
    ~Jo Anna EL