Why does a heartache hurt so?

by Spoken Silence   Jan 3, 2008


Why does a heartache hurt so?
No matter how much I say it's OK
This pain only can get worse.
I'm lost and I can't help it.
I feel no emotions and I have no solitude.
I was fine but you had to come back,
And tare me up again once I was fixed.
Like a doll on the shelf falling,
Why am I always falling?
My heartache will never seize.
My pain will never falter.
These feelings were all true.
This pain is death.
My heart has been stabbed
And stabbed again.
I'm bleeding and I can't breathe.
Why does a heartache hurt so?

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  • 16 years ago

    by fakesmile

    Great job!! i really like this poem.. and i think anyone can relate to it...

  • 16 years ago

    by xoxkatrinaxox

    Ok great job but a 4\5 because too lines are not very good, this is my advice so you dont have to agree but the line "Like a doll on the shelf falling,
    Why am I always falling?" i think it should be im like a doll falling off a shelf, buti dont know why i keep on falling, or something like that, and the line "My heart has been stabbed
    And stabbed again. " i think it should be my heart has been stabbed over and over again" but this is my advice i think it would improve the poem. but great job!!

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