Fave stanza:

"Some routes are blocked,
Where admittance is denied,
Created from the sorrows,
Of those that made me cry."

this stanza stood out from the others.

a very well written, deeply moving piece of poetry! well done! 5/5 this piece touched me.

xD Happy Thoughts xD
As Always,
~NinjaGirl~

I guess that 3rd stanza is just loved by all... never had a poem where two people in a row said they loved the same stanza ;) glad you guys love it :)

Very unique selection of words, just added more power to the poem, liked it a lot.

great write

all the best and take care

I really like how this one is so descriptive, as I read it I can picture being in a maze of live and love and sadness, great poem

The way you organized the imagery in this one was a very potent and powerful work. 5/5

Very nicee
the flow was good
rhyme was good
the message was cool
very unique piece here
nothing I can honestly say
was bad at all
nice job
5/5
kaila

Wow...
I love this from the beginning to the end. It is powerful and excellently portrayed and whole poem creates so vivid images in my mind. I can relate to this in a way. Truly great piece, filled with excellently expressed thoughts and emotions. I like the labyrinth metaphor a lot.
My favorite stanza is:

-The paths are overgrown,
And the walls, riddled in vines,
Can you find the prize?
To this broken heart of mine?-

The repetition of "the broken heart of mine" is very clever, it added fantastic effect to the whole piece.
The fact that you said so much with just four stanza is amazing.
The flow of the whole piece is flawless.

Excellently done!

It was beautifully writen i love the 2nd and 3rd stanza's seems full of emotion and the flow was really good enough to figure out and feel the deep words.. great and very outstanding piece! 5/5

Took my breath away, you my man are soo going into my favourites, this poem is amazing, the wording and the emotion are just brilliant.

Really really good. i loved it. Great work. It was so powerful and emotive. Its very sad but there is such a truth in this poem.
xx
Taegan Emily

The paths are overgrown,
And the walls, riddled in vines,
Can you find the prize?
To this broken heart of mine?

loved it.
absolutely loved it.<33

once again, an amazing poem:]]

The poem sets foward the emotion's that you, the writer were feeling at the time. Most of the time it is hard for the reader to really connect with the writer in poems but you did an amazing job. It was as if i were seeing and feeling this through you, very extrordinary.

5/5 and added to my favorites

Take care,
Alexander

I like this poem, it is so creative and unique. Your idea for this piece is quite impressing and atmosphere that you created in whole poem is amazing because you mixed superbly expressed emotions with excellent and very vivid descriptions.
I love every stanza and I honestly can't chose my favorite one, they are all great and i enjoyed in every line.
Well done, it seems that you are really talented and you should be proud on this poem.

Awwwww.. that is so cute.. Great poem... Arooj :D

Cool poem, like it alot =)

Beautiful absolutely beautiful

Oooouuuuch
really amazin poem
I loved the last stanza
keep it up 5/5

I loved this, Darling. I can't exactly pinpoint my favorite stanza or line because it's all amazing. xD

You did a wonderful job with the emotion, flow, and wording and all that goodygoody. : ]

xD I loved it.
5/5

Wow...i like this one very much..ur such a good writer

Beautiful!
5/5.