He took her life

by Ithoughtheluvdme   Jan 5, 2008


He took her life that Friday afternoon it felt like a sunny day in the middle of June. she was outside playing gracefully with her friends she knew something bad was going to happen she just didn't know when.he was drunk like many times before he had just got through pushing her mom and calling her wh0re.he told her to come get ready for dinner she knew something wasn't right cause of the way he was looking at her and

grinning.he told her she was a pretty little girl and her eyes shined like a brand new pearl.through it all she really wanted to hurl but she didn't know what to do so she stabbed him with a knife everyone was crying and blaming it on her after all that all she listened to was her cat's soft per.then she found a way to deal with her pain and

strife she cuts her wrist sometimes to make it right all the walls around break down and her head starts to spin around its been some years but time couldn't heal her br0k3ntearz so until this day she still has a scar on her heart where that man took her life away and tore her soul apart *this is about me so pleazzz comment and vote*

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  • 16 years ago

    by TwistedAngel xx

    I agree with tori
    its hard to read when its all together
    but i did read it and did like it
    good work
    xx

  • 16 years ago

    by Nobodys Hero

    You did a good job
    =]
    Nice work

  • 16 years ago

    by tori anningfield

    I like it, but then I don't.
    If you wrote it in for like

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    Instead of paragraph form, it might
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    Just a personal opinon.

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