The Moment I Said It

by SH3S fiNAllY H3R3 l0V3 U N3NA   Jan 5, 2008


It was in that dark, stary night
All I can see was you heavenly face.
You have given me these butterflies,
That flutter in my heart all the time.

You've given me the confidence,
To tell you what I feel,
But somehow I still feel very scared.

I didn't know the exact feelings I had for you,
Until that night you had kissed me.
Ever since that night,
I've been wondering if you feel the same.

It was until that night,
When I told you "I Love You."
Everything seemed so clear to me,
And that's when you said "I Love You, too."

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  • 16 years ago

    by HidinVictim

    Such a happy ending, very pretty, but you might try changing

    It was in that dark, stary night
    to
    It was on that dark, stary night
    the poem might flow better.

  • 16 years ago

    by crystaljean88

    This poem was a very happy love poem. it kept my intrest through the whole thing. the flow seemed a bit off, but other than that it was great. i still rate it a 5 tho :)

  • 16 years ago

    by FlawlesslyTarnished

    The first two stanzas can describe me so well.
    [just i never told the kid i loved him]
    but still, a beautiful poem.
    i liked the idea of it. :] and the wording too.
    i really like this piece. another great write. 5/5.

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