Forbidden Revelation

by jLegendc   Jan 7, 2008


I don't know how to put these in words,
I don't know if I should,
There are things I hold,
But I don't know if it's time to be told...

A barrier of numbers separates us,
My unpredictable heart prohibits myself to trust,
Do I really have to take such risks?
One mistake will be really hard to fix...

I think anything that is forbidden,
Will always be broken,
THese feelings doesn't want to be hidden,
So hear me confessing!

Everyday I make decisions,
I hope that it'll not turn out to be a cloud of illusion,
NOw this is my revelation,
It's true that you have become my passion...

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  • 17 years ago

    by Stephanie Naylor

    "I don't know how to put these in words,
    I don't know if I should,
    There are things I hold,
    But I don't know if it's time to be told..."

    Im not sure that i really understand this stanza

    "Everyday I make decisions,
    I hope that it'll not turn out to be a cloud of illusion,
    NOw this is my revelation,
    It's true that you have become my passion..."

    This part ^^ is just WOW, its very powerful and the words are so expressive. VERY vERY good, i liked it alot.

    a well deserved

    5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by NyellMoonlight

    Wow...
    This is truly amazing, excellently written. Whole poem has great, fantastically created atmosphere. I like the choice of words, emotions are expressed in a great way in every stanza. Whole poem is breathtaking and I can relate to it in a way.
    Deep piece...
    I can't chose my favorite part, whole piece is absolutely amazing.
    Keep up!

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