Where You At

by Anonymous   Jan 8, 2008


I wanna have an influence like Kanye' West,
Have inspiration all across my chest,
Put me to the test and I'll come out best,
But I've been through bad times, I must confess.

When I was coming up I had an illness,
I'm still tryna escape from it,
And I don't really know what it really is,
The doctors got me crazy and I'm gettin' pissed,
But I keep pushin' through and I'ma make it high,
I feel like givin' up at times, I ain't gonna lie,
But I know success'll come if I only try,
And I'ma never give in I'd rather die,
Success is psychologal as Immortal said,
If ya mind is gone then you too are dead,
Make sure ya always fed,
Both physically and mentally inside ya head,
Coz pain is nothin' if you got strength,
And I got it now so can succeed at any length,
Put me on the pedestal coz you know I'll win,
All my hard work is makin' up fa my sins,
Makin' it all better now livin' within people's grins,
Mind of matter, don't ever forget that,
It ain't where you're from, it's where you at.

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  • 16 years ago

    by Rob Matt

    Great flow, the structure is kinda funky though

  • 16 years ago

    by Eri

    Wow...you are such a great write...
    you make me look like an ameture...cuz i am one :)

    but like i said i loved it....one of the reasons i added u to favorites ur poems r awesome ^_^

  • 16 years ago

    by BrixGoesxRawr

    HAHA! I loved it! The last line actually made me say "YES!" hahaha. But, that's cos I'm a retard. xD

    I loved it I loved it I loved it.

    It flowed amazingly and THE MESSAGE. was so amazing. And I loved the confidence in this; it was just so beautiful. Always have confidence in yourself & never lose it. It's the best thing you got :]

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