I Love You, But Don't Want You

The message is too familiar.. more or less similar to several songs like 'you're beautiful' and 'terminal' and other poems..^__^ but nonetheless, i still enjoyed the read.
since the thought isn't that new, you could have made it more catchy by putting a twist in it's structure or wordings..(my opinion)

i enjoy reading your works. yeh! go you! ^_^

Wonderful way of protraying emotions. I loved the shortness of this piece as well, even though it was short, the message was so powerful and touching. Wonderful work again! keep it up! :D

I like this one a lot. I think you used punctuation in a very accurate way, and it helped out with the flow. I also like how the last stanza was slightly longer than the others.
In the line, "But I still love you like you are still let here." I thin kyou could take out the first "still" and it would still make sense, and it wouldnt sound so repetitive. Nice work. :)

Hmm.. the last line sounds confusing w/me..anyway, i love the emotions and there are some few lines i can truly relate about it.. and it really made me feel sad.. this piece such filled of emotions.. 5/5

Again I loved the title and this time the poem was just great. I could feel the emotions you described and it was real for me. The last two lines really sumed up the poem perfectly well done *5/5*