Will You Love Me?

by SH3S fiNAllY H3R3 l0V3 U N3NA   Jan 10, 2008


Will you love me
If they say I'm cheating?
Or just believe them
And let me go?

Will you love me
If they say I'm crazy?
Or will you lock me in an institute,
Where I will be without you?

Will you love me
If things start going wrong?
Or will you pack up your things
And get away from me?

Will you love me
If I tell you I hate you?
Because technically,
I simply can't live without you.

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  • 16 years ago

    by janiL

    Love! =D
    very simple.. and very straight to the point..^_^

    just some disturbing typos..
    "Of will you lock me in an institute," Of should be Or
    "And get get away from me?" only one get right? ^_^

    anyway, love!!! =D

  • 16 years ago

    by JustKristina

    Awesome Poem! I loved it! I loved how it showed that all you want in a relationship is trust. It also protrayed that you want someone to look past you words and give you what you truly want. Wonderful work! I loved it! keep it up! :D

  • 16 years ago

    by Sweet lig

    Wow it really made me smile in the last stanza's very surprising thoughts... but the whole lines was absolutely great and powerful.. nice asking those sweet and lovely words... 5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by Chelsey

    I know you don't want short comments.
    But there's not much to say on this poem.
    Except that its great.

    I really loved this poem.
    I love all of your poems, because their easy to relate to.
    and they don't take hours to read.

    Keep up the good work.
    <3