Pieces of You

by JUSTkeepFALLING   Jan 12, 2008


I thought the pain would start to die
Slowly past the wake of time
Pieces of you, they're part of me
Everything that I wanted to be

I wanted to hide you from what I mar
A bleeding cut that turns to scar
You were the braces to keep my life straight
But I was broken, you came too late

Angels cry inside my soul
Depression bringing life so low
Demons laughing at my soul
Proves they finally won their goal

Its too much for me to handle alone
When I called you hung up the phone
Handgun in mouth, I count back from ten
When I hit one this sad story will end

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  • 16 years ago

    by Feels Like Ecstacy

    Another really good poem.. 5/5.. but here's me attempting criticism lol.. the soul/low and soul/goal .. it's good rhyming but idk just sounds funny.. good emotion and all that.. lol.. this might have been completely pointless..

  • 16 years ago

    by sage way

    Heiz.. lol,, if you werent done yet,,you shouldnt have posted this poem..

    its such a nice poem.. but i was very dissapointed when i saw the ending,, there was no ending,... hehe..