Comments : Losing You

  • 16 years ago

    by Childofthecherry

    This is a great poem very emotional
    im getting choked up reading it
    great job

  • 16 years ago

    by Kaila

    Life and death is part of all of us, however it is terribly sad when we have to experience it before it is time. You did a great job with this poem and i love your outlook on the situation. i think alot of people would look at it in a more negative way. i love this poem!

  • 16 years ago

    by ItsYou ItsAlwaysBeenYou

    This poem makes me think of a mother losing her child to cancer. my eyes are all watery it is truly a touching poem. you are a great writer and this poem was written very well with a lot of emotion. :DDD

  • 16 years ago

    by CY GINDLE

    I feel bad liking this poem. but its so good
    but it is fill with so much pain you know what I mean? excellent piece

  • 16 years ago

    by Silent Screams

    Wonderful. <3

    Thats all I can really say. Its touchingly and painfully sad to know that this happens within our world Many times. But i agree it does make me think of a mother losing her child. But its honestly well written detailed wise bur i thought the flow was a little edgy. Other then that I Loved it. 5/5 Keep Writing!

    -Ally
    P.S- Thanks for your comment on my Poem "She's A Missing, Lost Cause"

  • 16 years ago

    by A l y s s a

    I'm with the others - as soon as I read this poem it made me think of a Mother losing her child. I pray that this didn't happen to you and that you didn't have to go through this tragedy.

    This poem is very emotion-filled and strong. I think your choice of words was excellent and the imagery was good too. As I could play the whole bedside scene out in my mind...brilliant.

    Ally. x

  • 16 years ago

    by pLeASeTakEMyHeArT

    It made me think of my daddy, ahhh the way u write seems a blessing!

  • 16 years ago

    by Chris

    This poem is great. Really gets to the reader. Awesome job. Sorry for the loss as well~

  • 16 years ago

    by HvN

    This is a beautiful piece of work, very sad but at the same time it shows true emotions of losing a loved one. Keep it up, it's excellent! :] 5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by Unamed

    This is great!!!!!...i really liked it...
    i'm so sorry u lost sam...
    i love this poem!!..keep it up!!
    **********aLy*****************

  • 16 years ago

    by TwistedAngel xx

    Wow that was awesome
    keep it up
    and I hope ur feeling okay
    My prayers are with you
    5/5
    xx

  • 16 years ago

    by Aimar

    Wow u made me cry !!!!

  • 16 years ago

    by CWG

    Wonderful emotional write. Great Job. 5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by Jennifer RIP Lesthat Hayden

    This was really good. I just wish there weren't mistakes in it. I have a knack for picking out typos. I just do. So when I read I find typos and they distract me from the poem. That's why I feel it's very important to have correct spelling, punctuation, capitalization, grammar, etc. Many people don't notice these things but it really does improve the poem. It was a great poem though. I give it a four.

  • 16 years ago

    by Lonely Rider

    " Until we meet again honey
    Our love we will send to the heaven's above. "

    dat ws very emotional and hearfelt... impressive work...
    loved it...

  • 16 years ago

    by halie

    Wow
    that wuz a great poem,
    that reminded me of my great grandma,
    she died a couple years ago,
    and i still remember going and visiting her,
    i rlly miss her
    but i know shes in heaven,
    plus to make matters worse the day she died,
    my cat, my mom had him 4 18 years, he wuz old, died the same day, well actually we had to put him to sleep
    but
    5/5
    great poem

  • 16 years ago

    by waiting 4 some1

    So beautiful and touching
    everyone will die that's a fact but good ones always leave us footprinets that will never be forgotten

  • 16 years ago

    by Mike Wilburn

    Meaningful expression for the most painful experience a person can face, especially a parent. This loss would devistate me.

  • 16 years ago

    by kia

    This was really well written. Full of feeling and emotion. Very sad but in a beautiful way

  • 16 years ago

    by JodiieBaybeh

    Aw that had so much emotion it was lovely